After finishing our amazing stories based on the fantastic picture book Journey we have begun to look at editing our writing to make it even better. Even famous authors have to go back and look through their writing to improve it, so we had a go.
We started with simple story sentences and worked out how we could chop them up and make them better, and then read through our own stories to see if there were any sentences that weren’t as brilliant as some of the others. We chopped them up and added in some fantastic language to make it really interesting to the reader!